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热度 71已有 188 次阅读 |2019-5-13 17:13 |个人分类:英语学习

小朋友正儿八经写了一个故事,图文并茂,大概初衷是想做个绘本。只是在A4纸上画得乱七八糟,字体凌乱不堪,翻了一下好几页内容,设计有封面、封底,封底还有故事介绍和作者简介。小朋友标注了书的级别,画了二维码,还标了定价。


作者介绍部分她把自己好好夸了一下,笑得我肚子疼。单词有拼写错误,我做了纠正;其他语法错误、词语选择错误则保留了原貌。


The Pumpkin Story


Once upon a time, there was a big beautiful pumpkin who lived in a beautiful farm with a beautiful farmer. But the farmer doesn’t take care of the pumpkin. Every day, he doesn’t water, read or give sun light to the pumpkin. The pumpkin is not healthy. After two weeks, the pumpkin is already very very thin. All the other pumpkins said that he was the ugly pumpkin. The thin pumpkin was sad. He was also very angry. So he planned revenge for the farmer.


The pumpkin said to its friends. “Hi, friends, I want to revenge on the farmer. Do you agree?” “Yes!” said the other pumpkins. So he had many pumpkin babies in the garden. The farmer said, “OH, my, there are so many pumpkins!” Then he realized that he was not good to the pumpkin. So he changed and became good. Now there was a beautiful pumpkin with a beautiful farm and a beautiful and kind farmer.


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This story showed us that we need to care for plants and make the world more beautiful.


About the author:


The author is a kind, smart and beautiful girl. She likes to draw when she is six years old. She created paint and she has art. We need to learn from her.


Book level: AR0.1


这个AR 0.1也很有意思,估计小朋友感觉自己写得不咋样。

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回复 夏天雷克斯 2019-5-14 07:58
  
回复 圆豆妈妈 2019-5-14 14:44
期待小宝贝的更多作品,表扬!
回复 iaoeng. 2019-5-14 15:49
真棒
回复 jackcht 2019-5-14 21:00
不怕牛娃学得好,就怕牛娃有思想
回复 wx_冰冰_RYLNP 2019-5-14 22:35
    
回复 wx_团子_Y6z7g 2019-5-15 01:43
小小的娃有一颗大大的心
回复 whkn 2019-5-15 04:48
厉害。
回复 人虫 2019-5-15 06:46
优秀啊
回复 wx麦田 2019-5-15 08:02
好棒啊
回复 wx_土豆地_ldlj6 2019-5-15 08:31
  
回复 wx_杨明_kBc4S 2019-5-15 08:44
  
回复 朱晓铭 2019-5-15 09:03
  
回复 lylianzi 2019-5-15 09:22
厉害厉害
回复 哈哈哈! 2019-5-15 09:36
  
回复 tangrao 2019-5-15 09:39
可以出书

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